Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2020 11:43 PM Title: Robyn’s Teacher

Uh oh. Robyn being a bitch again. She totally deserves having her power locked away. Being Cleo's girlfriend  has inflated her head. Also fitting since she did the same to Sam.

Interesting that each generation of Olympians is less powerful than the last. Sounds like current gen is basically mortal. They should really do something about that. Sounds like Leah needs to join Robyn in lessons.

Is is weird that I'm imagining Joyce as an older woman even though you said she looks 30?

Now you've got to got to got to have Cleo and Leah do girly collegeagey stuff. 2 best friends who haven't seen each other in months screams that they would do stuff. Like dancing and shopping and going out to eat and getting into mischief, and laughing a lot. Cleo can introduce Leah to mortal things Robyn introduced her to. They could go out looking to get Leah a one use boy toy with Cleo as wing woman. Lots of flirting, some sexy times at mortal scale then with Leah big and the man tiny doing tiny toy stuff followed by our regularly scheduled untimely demise. Robyn and Joyce can join in the fun when Robyn's made satisfactory progress over x amount of time. Cleo and Leah, shrinking people on the dance floor? Drinking games with tiny people in their cups? 4 bikini clad goddesses at the beach?

Author's Response:

The Olypian thing is a later plot point-

"t I'm imagining Joyce as an older woman even though you said she looks 30" - Joyce is an Olympian, They are referred to as "immortals" so she is an older woman by human standards for sure.

"Cleo and Leah do girly collegeagey stuff" started like that?  I Tried? Maybe?

Kind regards

JFT