Date: April 23 2020 1:14 PM Title: Robyn’s Rifle
Oh man this story is awesome, i found myself reading all of it in 2 days, you have a really great fantasy and telling the story from the point of view of the goddesses and the mortals gives a great insight. Thank you for this story
Author's Response:
This review means alot to me! Thanks man! Glad you enjoyed it!
More coming!
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 22 2020 10:52 PM Title: Robyn’s Rifle
Nice creative use of power here with the rifle. Kaylee's perspective of the events was a little confusing, but i guess that was intentional. Made sense reading the rest of the chapter. New toy or servant? Cindy no. 2 or newest member of the lobster tank? Or even s servant for Cindy...
It's good that Robyn still lacks control. More realistic (ha!) if she has to spend a good while practicing what Cleo has been doing her whole life.
Don't worry about speed. Better slow than burnout, I always say.
Author's Response:
Bringing in a new power to train Robyn properly! & Brought Leah in for some fun time with Cleo in upcoming chatpers!
Kaylee & Cindy will be getting a chatper soon too! Your comment here got me thinking!
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 22 2020 5:01 PM Title: Robyn’s Rifle
I gotta admit I was kinda confused as to what happened in the beginning, so cleo and Robyn went to the coffee shop destroyed it and took and shrank the 3 baristas right?
As for the rest, god damn that was hot with the rifle scene. Very nice filler episode haha.
As for Robyns coming out, panzer thought of some interesting ideas, also in a very popular and diverse city, where the whole world can see all the giant Olympians along with robyns sisters. Giantess Robyn can also place her tits on the ground and form giant craters to mark her name on the world similar to the celebrity handprints in Hollywood, forming 2 more wonders of the world haha.
Then people will have to make a line to worship Robyns divine body.
Maybe like a Roman coliseum -esque type of ceremony where the mortals have to compete for Robyns amusement and those that fail get eaten. Those that pass get to please her.
All ending with an official Robyn and cleo goddess sex :)
Author's Response:
The perspective shift was intentional! two sides to the same coin! Thanks for reaching out on DA! I'll get back to you on there again next time im on.
The "Coming out" is still WIP! :D I am enjoying the ideas and sugestions for it though!
Kind regards
JFT