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Reviewer: Sunshine1 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2020 10:29 PM Title: Robyn’s Divinity

I... wow. Holy shit. <3 <3



Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it! <3 Feel free to suggest other themes!

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2020 10:16 PM Title: Robyn’s Divinity

So much to unpack here. Robyn seems to be having a bit of an identity crisis without knowing. She's dissociating mortal Robyn from goddess Robyn. She doesn't see her parents as her parents anymore and doesn't see Janna and Sam as her sisters. I'd hate to break it to her, but that means she should think of Cassandra as her mother and Cleo as her sister. Absolutely kill her libido.

Also, I guess Janna doesn't like her parents either since the first thing she does is shove them in a box. What's with people hating their parents?

Cleo's going to be pissed when she finds out Sam can't post because Robyn shrunk her and not her art supplies and camera.

Robyn's being hypocritical, judgemental, and something else I can't think of a word for but she's being it. 'Cleo make my sisters priestesses. Oh no, Sam's abusing and killing humans. Better unmake her a priestess instead of talking to her and setting boundaries on her behavior.' Meanwhile she uses them as sex toys, has murdered/ assisted in murdering millions (RIP Middle Earth) and now takes pleasure in eating them. She essentially gave her sisters power and knowing what she does, she has some nerve to judge. Cleo should talk some sense into her. Can't jump in and punish someone for something you haven't told them not to do. Set boundaries then punish for broken boundaries. She's obviously going to be a bad parent with that sort of parenting strategy.

Hope Cleo and Robyn aren't too mean when they next see Leah. Sure she narced to Cass, but Cleo would have died if Leah hadn't come to the rescue. And she did them a huge favor by letting Cass be angry and let that anger drop off over a few weeks. Otherwise, no question, Robyn would have been snuffed out like a candle in a hurricane. So really, she saved both of them at least once each and is entirely the reason Robyn is a goddess. She should get a hero's welcome, and first dibs on the mortals in Cleo's fridge, minimum as a thank you. And she should make this her theme song (You're Welcome -Disney's Moana) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79DijItQXMM



Author's Response:

So I took a chapter to clear up the sister thing, address the accusations of hypocracy and give Cleo a playful scene.

I'll go into the Leah issue soon dont worry! There are a few Olympians I need to find time for!

My response is short as Ive just written a chapter to address your sisters concerns xD

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2020 6:07 PM Title: Robyn’s Divinity

Oh i know humanity Is fucked so long as Cleo and Robyn exist LOL. I was just mainly worried about Robyns sisters. Based on what I understood it was like robyn didn’t care about them anymore

“I no longer want them, a reminder of a life no longer mine,” she said casually, “I’m no longer human Janna, we are sisters in memory only, although I do still feel love for you,” she offered as Janna felt a small part of her heart break. Robyn plucked a fleeing woman from the floor and tossed it into her mouth as she smiled towards Cleo. “

Sounded like robyn doesn’t see them as sisters anymore and just some slaves like the rest of humanity. Hope that’s not the case..

Author's Response:

Based on your concern for her sisters, I clearled that up a little in the new chapter.

Hope this helps a little.

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2020 3:45 PM Title: Robyn’s Divinity

Holy fuck... Robyn has already been corrupted by power... not only does she eat humans now when she considered it gross before, but she legit just broke her connection with her sisters... what the hell?! I mean the rest of humanity I can understand but her own sisters?!

The rest of the story will be a scary one. Interesting chapter..

Im guess there will be more power play between the two goddesses, destroying more cities. Maybe Robyn will release her parents and force them and her sisters to worship her. Robyn will be more controlling which kind of scares Cleo, Robyn is no longer tied to cleo so she can’t strip her of her power. I’m guessing the direction you are going with Robyn now is she’s lost all her morals and will now be a bitchy goddess so might as well be cruel. Maybe she forces her family to clean her feet or suffer the consequences.

OOOH or maybe cleo and Robyn can get back at that Olympian girl that snitched on cleos mom.. forgot what her name was.

Cleo should gather a world meeting to announce the presence of a co goddess and the world watched as they grow huge and make love.

Finally... Will Robyn cross the line and eat her own family...? Maybe the parents of sisters do something disrespectful which gets her mad.

Author's Response:

Okay where to start, The speed that she turned to vore was in response to review request on here,It may of taken longer if i hadnt had the request but it was coming.

She gave her parents to Janna and she obviously still cares for her sisters or visit would of gone much worse for them.

Cleo will be looking to have words with Leah for sure aswell as other Olympians! :)

Robyn and Cleo are now equal to announcing her to world sounds Logical! ill think on this.

If anyone is cheering for humanity in this story they need to stop xD

Kind regards

JFT

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