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Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2020 10:54 PM Title: Cleo’s Mother

Humans just love putting themselves in a position to get eaten. Asking for an embassy inside Cleo's home. The nerve.

I think its funny that Robyn has been shrinking down and running across the street for a toilet for however long. A month or more? Guess she actually might not be needing it if she can now magic away her unseemly needs like Cleo.

TV needs to be OLED. Only the best for a goddess.

Funny that Robyn still has to remind Cleo to feed her pets. Cleo should just make them their own mini apartment with clear walls and an auto restocking pantry/fridge. Or maybe Robyn takes over feeding duty with her new powers.

Blended humans. Something tells me Cleo is going to have a long way to go before she makes a passable meal with no divine intervention.

Love the goddess room. Can't wait for some Olympians Cleo doesn't like to come through so she and Robyn can intimidate them.

I wonder what Cindy gets up to when not attending to Cleo. Also, does she get her own room in the apartment or some mortal apartment building with an incredibly terrified landlord? Is she even allowed to sleep? Or join Cleo and Robyn in watching tv? etc.

Seems like Cleo satisfies Robyn more than the otherway around.

Ah, Mother Cassandra. The only being that makes Cleo look like a mortal by comparison. And a liar too. 'I changed nothing...' Ha. Though I don't see what Cassandra could use Robyn for that she couldn't do infinitely better herself. Unless its to spy on Cleo or something. Helicopter parenting Goddess style.

Sarah cameo? ;)

Samantha's gonna freak and Janna's gonna.... be Janna I guess.




Author's Response:

Heya Panzer,

I get the impression you're the only one who knew Cassandra ^^ The Angel line was a bit on the nose maybe! :)

Cleo will be trying to use the kitchen properly in future chapters for sure!

I will be bringing some olympians over soon, just had to finish tying up the setup & ascensions!

Cassandra is probably going to helicopter parent for a while, shes been living the low-power life for a long time. Sarah cameo would tie it a bit too close to POGU but maybe who knows! depends if people want it.

Sam & Janna are making an appearance in teh new chapter!

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: Sunshine1 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2020 7:51 PM Title: Cleo’s Mother

Oh my-- this is hot. And opens a few new possibilities.. Mmm.. Maybe Robyn no longer find humans to taste bad? Opens up for some amazing powerplay scenes with her sisters. Meeting them but nonchalantly nibbling on others. Oh my.. Am I daydreaming? :)



Author's Response:

I am so glad you're enjoying it! I took your sugestions and ran with them for the new Chapter, Robyn's Divinity! feel free to throw more ideas & desires my way! :D

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2020 6:57 PM Title: Cleo’s Mother

NOW robyn is a goddess! Oh my, I’m just as excited as Cleo.. hehe. However... it sounds like robyn just made a devils bargain. She would be most comparable to a genie, all the power in the world but Cassandra is her restricting lamp.

Interesting chapter! Now Cleo and Robyn can truly be together!

Author's Response:

Thanks for thre review! Robyn's divinity is going out soon and from then im open to scenarios! :D

Cassandra's mian aim is to use Robyn as a way to get official invites to the world for whoever she wants without needing to flex power, Shes been living a low-power life for a long time.

Kind regards

JFT

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