Date: April 16 2020 8:14 PM Title: Cleo’s Mercy
Nit-pick again. 400 ft.
Don't like the idea of priestesses larger than Cleo and Robyn. Hope the size she gave them is their hard max with an even lower hard max for mortals that priestesses enlarge. Demi-priestesses?
Maybe a size heirarchy:
Cleo, Robyn and Cindy, 400 to whatever Cleo feels like
Priestesses, hard max 400
Demi-Priestesses, 50
Mortals, Squishably normal to micro.
Cleo's getting ready for trouble. Would any trouble besides her mother even happen? She's the only one angry about anything so far. I'd think the council would be happy with setup complete and Cleo 're-educated' and forget that Cleo even exists other than the energy she provides to power their world.
Are there going to be any light hearted chapters with her friends/family before people start trying to start something? Will Cleo get her friends on her side? Cleo and Robyn never did get to actually do the shopping.
Thinking upon what happens to Olympians that piss Cleo off or otherwise try to start something. Will Cleo offer the vanquished a position as worshipper, servant, sex slave, lobster, one way trip back to Olympia or death? I don't think she'd want to kill a fellow Olympian, she'd never be able to go home and her family wouldn't look at her the same way. Much higher stakes than killng mortals since mortals are her property. What happens if an Olympian worships Cleo? Is their worship energy worth X mortals?
Cleo should have the humans start building an interstellar empire for her. Much more worship energy. Cleo and Robyn the size of a star using a planet of unbelievers as a toy.
Author's Response:
Heya Panzer,
Thanks for the catching that size issue, I have corrected it. I have just thrown together a quick "update" chapter but now I am happy with the situation, I can return to "light hearted" chapters.
I am expecting some Olympian guests, We will revisit Robyn's sisters and Shopping is still in my mind.
Cleo doesnt care so much for the sizes of others, shes not insecure in her power, although you are right and in my update chapter, i locked other priestesses to 100ft while in Cleo's home.
The only issue with "Interstellar" is that earth isnt there and Olympia are not so technological as magical so its a long term project with Cleo having limited inscentive right now.
Kind Regards
JFT
Date: April 16 2020 4:13 PM Title: Cleo’s Mercy
Cleo shuould etudy why her method works so imencly better than the rest if her kinds, once shes dissuaded the counsel from messing with her more long term.
And yeah, their normal method is way worse than petri dish world or making insoles out of cities, or either used in clothing.
Robyn should also still show her more sicfi and fanticy movies, books, shows, and art, may give them both more ideas. And also since the world is now cooperating, getting more skills, say dancing for example, and ideas by skimming the internet (Cleo dosn't seem to have been fully introduced to it, that is shamfull and needs to be rectified).
Also, with so many prestrces, beyond rewarding them for good service the obvious way, perhaps allow them to customize themselves to a degree, wings may be practical and tell other people who they are, but making the body and clothes they want (the digree corresponding to how well they have been boing obviously) may yield more loyal and dedicated ones, and make masses fear or respect or other the various priestesses. And some basic competition shouldent be too bad. (You can guess the degree and kind of alterstions but thats up to you)
The storys been good, Robyn should show Cleo the innumerable examples of how other relationships have developed and work out how they want to take their's, but its your story, take what I'v said as you will. Otherwise, let us readers see wherer you go next.
I also read the Charlotte stories when they were coming out, pretty decent.
Author's Response:
Hiya DcZ,
I took a quick chapter to moderize Cleo for you. She going to be dressing with more variety going forwards. I also like your idea of making the wings status symbols among the priestesses, this is something I am exploring.
Cleo also recognised Robyn as closer to an equal in thie small update.
Glad you enjoyed Charlotte's stories, they were my first.
Kind regards
JFT