Date: April 16 2020 9:21 AM Title: Cleo's Perspective
Wooow, human farm! I've been playing with such a tought myself for a story for a long time, but maybe on a less industrial scale than this. I loooove it though! Keep going, I'm enjoying this story a lot.
Also, thanks for saying you liked my story in my previous review, it means a lot <3
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words! If you have anything you would like to see let me know! I'd be happy to do a chapter for you.
Many thanks
JFT
Date: April 15 2020 10:17 PM Title: Cleo's Perspective
Damn! All at once, you've created a much less sympathetic character in Tiana, created a pure nightmare fuel scenario showing that Earth got off lucky, shown that Cleo, a mass murderer has limits to her cruelty, and traumatized Robyn and Cleo.
Interesting that with all the 'efficiency' Tiana is claiming, she's apparently barely just started being able to store power for personal use. Shows how below Cleo the rest of the Gods are. I mean she's never even done anything powerful enough to do the eye thing.
Author's Response:
Hi again Panzer,
Yea Cleo is a powerful individual and her people are going to find that out soon!
Thanks again for your feedback!
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 15 2020 9:50 PM Title: Cleo's Perspective
Jeez that was dark.. Tiana makes cleo seem like merciful goddess in comparison... I’d gladly prefer to be ruled by cleo if I had the option lol.
This chapter was very very interesting.. based on cleos disgust, we can see that cleo May in fact be the “hero” in this story.. or at least an antihero. Even though she’s done a lot of bad things, Tiana and the rest of her people are even more insane...
Robyn now is traumatized and afraid of cleo once again. Cleo is going to have to either treat robyn like the rest of the mortals or turn robyn into a goddess as well for protection and for love. There can’t rlly be a between anymore as cleo is now being watched.
Damn I’m speechless.. this was a crazy yet good chapter! Glad to see you updating again! Giantessworld wasn’t the same without ya haha.
Author's Response:
Hi Reclaimer,
Yes, I felt the dark perspective of how they think humans should be viewed as farm animals helped contrast Cleo's relativly benevolent nature.
Thanks for the kind words! It keeps me writing!
Kind regards
JFT