Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2020 11:52 PM Title: Cleo's Decree

I've gotta go with Cleo being in the right on this one. Wheelchair bound and flight phobic just isn't a good enough excuse to deny a god. At least the king got crushed by a nice set of boobs, even if they were his daughter's.

The interactive map was a fun idea. Reminds me of Grildrig's 'The Beach Blanket'. Remote control giantesses was also fun. Wish you'd spent a bit more time/detail on Robyn/Sophia solo fun and the 'fight'.

Cindy is becoming a regular fixture. Good pet.

I think you might have started going a bit fast on the updates. While I'm always excited to see them, I think they were starting to lose some of the detail of the earlier chapters.

Ideas:
Check in on Janna and Samantha and how becoming priestesses has changed their lives.

Show sex between Cleo and Robyn from the perspective of Robyn's parents/other tinys.

Shopping could be a source of fun modifying clothes to fit people or turning people into clothes and accessories. Hundreds of tiny people turned into candy pieces for edible bras and panties? Victoria's Secret with secret compartments. High heels with sky scrapers. Bras that double as stadiums. Oh and normal fancy dresses that women wear to parties and events to show off wealth and status. Obviously produced by terrified seamstresses to exacting specifications out of the finest Earthly fabrics.

Crushing resistance. Rag tag military makes its only stand against Cleo.

Mating Lobster boy and the princess as the Adam and Eve of people purpose bred for worhship and dying to Cleo and Robyn's whims.

Cleomas. Cleo makes her birthday replace Christmas and the very best offerings to her get some small gift from her. The vast majority get the knowledge that they don't get squished that day. And the worst.... squish or part of the breeding program.

Author's Response:

Hi Panzer

Thanks for the comprehensive review, Unfortunatly I was distracted by another review and felt the need to apply more context to Cleo's position.

There is little powerplay in the new chapter, Just things I wanted to say about the reality of this universe.

More sex coming soon if people want.

King regards

JFT