Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2020 6:58 PM Title: Cleo's Judgement

Privileged beyond measure, lacking the human perspective and emotionally explosive. Yep, that's Cleo.

"Olympian dudes are all pricks...I’m hoping to bring a couple here once I have established my control, Just so I can break them under my heel…" Aww, she just never found a nice guy. Also, Yes Please!

“It’s Me, You, Your Family,” Cleo admitted, “Then, the rest of them” Yesss. Sorry Earth.

“Because humans are dirty creatures, they will make a mess…” Cleo replied as she turned the page in the clothes catalogue, looking for inspiration. Laptop or tablet, Cleo. Save the trees!

”CLEOPATRA AURELIAN!” OH SHIT.

“WELL? LEAH CAME OVER AND TOLD ME EVERYTHING! A MORTAL CLEO? A MORTAL!!” Smart Leah. Let the mother goddess have time to simmer down before coming to Earth and causing a civilization ending argument.

“I am not a child anymore, I am my own woman, with my own world, You ruined yours, I will not let you ruin mine!” Thems fighting words.

‘Fucking Leah,’ she thought, ‘Didn’t even tell her the whole truth’ she realised with minor alarm. OH SHIT.

“Did you feed your lobsterman?” Cleo is just the worst pet owner.

“Furthermore, It has been decided that every world leader, monarch and commander will attend my temple, this weekend, and kiss the ground at my feet.” Well deserved including the punishment for not attending.
 
Cleo’s mind raced as she considered yanking her tiny girlfriend into her bikini, she felt the need for that release but knew she shouldn't abuse Robyn like that. Aww, she's learning. And Robyn did it anyway. Good things come to goddesses who treat their girlfriends right.

So how much more is 'Setup' of the world?

She could invite male gods she knows to not follow rules so she has an excuse to toy with them. Simple rule, no sexing priestesses without consent. Rule breaker becomes a toy in Cleo and Robyn's sex. etc

I'm currently imagining the father as just a proud papa with the attitude of 'let the neighbors talk, our daughter's better than theirs' to offset the anger of the mother. I'm also imagining the mother sneaking onto Earth anyway despite Cleo not welcoming her. She goes exploring learning about the subjugation of billions of mortals by her daughter, Hijinks ensue and Cleo and her mother eventually patching things up over a plate of mortals. And no one talks about the town or small city that got destroyed by her mother because a mortal grabbed her butt on the sidewalk.

Needs more giant smex and boobs and more power variation. Cleo seems to favor stopping time, telekinesis, teleportation, and of course our favorite, size manipulation. Maybe her friends and her mother have other favorite powers for subjugating mortals in addition to size manipulation. Fire, ice, electricity, lasers, sound, explosions, popping them like balloons, mind control, driving them insane, driving them to hurt or kill themselves, suffocation, melting, disintigration, transformation into a lesser animal. One friend could be the most polite goddess possible... to other gods, but make Cleo seem like a saint to mortals.

Author's Response:

Thanks for all the great feedback!

"So how much more is 'Setup' of the world? " - When the temples are built, Shes gaming the system by using the crystals directly and the humans are slowly building the temples around them, shes not in any hurry.

"She could invite male gods" - Cleo has some men from her past she would like to deal with.

Her mother is certainly not going to drop the issue, I have a plan for it I just need time.

This is a fetish story, I often ignore narrative or completly subvert it for a bit of a rub out, I'll see about messing with the powers some more. Cleo's time stop is a mindfuck for humanity as they are all left aware, its actually very dark.

 

Many thanks again!

JFT