Date: April 04 2020 10:49 PM Title: Cleo's Ultimatum
I think Robyn has officially been larger than Cleo due to her size when she collected Jessica. Cleo needs to correct that.
Cleo seems distracted with horniness. Maybe she should use some of that worship power to create new bodies for her to multitask from. Spread the load of the worship over multiple bodies.That would really scare Robyn.
Needs some sex with giant Cleo and Robyn out in the world with varying scale people as toys. Sex in/on/over a city/state/country. Using people/crowds/skyscapers/world geography.Definitely a slow move up the size chain so its not like, Cleo's been the size of a mountain now what.
I liked the scene with Cleo pretending to be mortal to get coffee. Maybe she and Robyn can disguise themselves and Robyn can teach her about mortal life. She could have a curious/ guilty pleasure side that enjoys it from time to time. Maybe a side lover or 2.
Cleo and Robyn are girlfriends now in word, but Robyn is definitely still a pet/toy. Maybe that can evolve more over time? Maybe Cleo's friends/family can be a catalyst to Cleo determining how she really feels.
Interested in what happens when Cleo meets Robyn's family and vice versa.
I looked back at Handmaids Tales, cause I think you did a great job with the creativity and descriptions, especially in chapters 1, 3 and 5.
Author's Response:
Thanks again Panzer,
I felt i should address the power thing although I'm not a big fan of clones so this Cleo's Crisis is my answer to that.
The last chapter was a bit world-building so the next one will be where some action should happen!
Interesting you goto Handmaids Tales! That's my least popular POGU series, Barely had any interest in it.
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 04 2020 7:54 PM Title: Cleo's Ultimatum
Wow you are fast! Another excellent chapter! It’s interesting seeing robyn sort of conflicted like does she really like her or does she fear her and suffer from Stockholm syndrome. Also nice to see she’s resistant from going cannibal, even though she will likely give in eventually.
Cleo and Robyn should both grow big and destroy another town... perhaps one that doesn’t believe in cleos divinity ;) sex in the city. the whole world watches Robyn, a fellow human help a destructive goddess, even her parents are shocked.
Author's Response:
Heya! Thanks again for the feedback.
I took a chapter to do some world building and try and flesh out the whole power thing.
I think the sex in the city idea shouldnt be too far away now!
Kind regards
JFT