Reviews For Cleo's Divinity
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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2020 1:10 PM Title: Cleo's Oversight

Seems like Cleo has a little trouble convincing the population to submit.

I like how naive she is and how little value she gives to human life. But on the other hand, this makes people more scared of her and they obey out of scaredness instead of submitting.

Thank you for writing so many chapters and reading these reviews!



Author's Response:

Cleo is certainly torn between her desire to live life and structure it.

Cleo's ultimatum went a long way to getting people on board but she's not happy with the result!

 

I hope you enjoy the latest chapter! It's pure fetish from thier perspective!

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04 2020 10:16 AM Title: Cleo's Oversight

It’s great to see Robyn still does care about her family and Deep down, despite being madly in love with Cleo, she still fears her. she still has a piece of her humanity left.

I’m curious how tall are Robyn and Cleo in this chapter? ;) since they are constantly changing sizes I figured it’s always good to mention it. I’m always interested in the size comparison for better visualization of the story.

It’s also very interesting seeing cleo so merciful and patient lately, she’s a goddess and could get that coffee as she pleases, yet she waits in line like the rest.

I’m really liking this relationship between Robyn and Cleo. She’s going to continue breaking her rules and I feel like Robyn will definitely be a goddess once Cleo fully trusts Robyn. Shes going to need to make her stronger and durable if she’s going to make love to her ;)

Cleo could slowly start making her subjects treat Robyn like a goddess and observe her behavior in a way to solidify her trust. Typical Greek style, she’s in bed while some people feed her others massage/lick/kiss her breasts, feet. Maybe even make Robyn eat her first human.... all to end in a powerful kiss and lovemaking scene as she almost fully leaves her humanity and embraces her one true goddess. It looks like you are setting Robyn down this dark path so why not make it interesting ;)

Anyways as usual great chapter!!! Can’t wait for more!

Author's Response:

Hello again,

While in the temple, you can assume they are keeping humans around an inch in comparison.

New chapter develops the mian story alot more and gives the world a Goddess to worship. Going forward she can justify her actions.

 

Kind regards

JFT

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