Date: April 03 2020 7:36 PM Title: Cleo’s Turmoil
One suggestion I had was hoping Cleo won’t be super super giant because I feel like you lose interaction between the giantess that are too big and the people. It actually has happened a lot with many giantess stories and for me at least it kinda makes the story dull as all they do is stomp and destroy. I like how you constantly change her heights every chapter!
After all she doesnt really want to harm the people she wants them to worship her so making her too too big would make it pointless for her to accomplish that desire.
Anyways, love your story! Can’t wait to read more :)
Author's Response:
As you pointed out, Cleo is as however big she feels like being, This allows her to do whatever she needs to do and I am not limiting her if she decides a country has to go. Although she will likley not be fixed at a larger size.
Many thanks for your feedback! inspired writing yet another chapter in short order!
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 03 2020 7:25 PM Title: Cleo’s Turmoil
Damn that was sad seeing how easy Robyn sort of turned on her family and boyfriend just for Cleo. A part of me feels like if her family ostracizes her too much robyn would go dark maybe asking Cleo to end them... I mean Cleo already wants to do that Lowkey!
I truly feel like once their relationship fully solidifies Robyn will become a goddess like her. So far there’s no limit to her power so it would make sense to turn her lover into an immortal all powerful being.
Great chapter! Also loved the two giantess playing chess with normal sized people as the pieces haha.
Author's Response:
Heya,
Its a fetish story at the end of the day, I can't spend chapters on family drama, so I intentionally have characters make realisations swiftly.
However in the most recent chapter I did revisit the family stuff in response to this feedback! :)
Cleo & Robyn have an intersting power dynamic I wish to explore more before advancing Robyn's abilities.
cheers
JFT