Date: April 09 2020 7:23 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
wait..so robyns parents are going to get killed? even if they arent thats your won godamn girlfriends parents! damn i hate her. i havent read a story that made me feel this much rage towards a character. this is a really good story for that
Author's Response:
They are locked away in Robyn's ring for aslong as Cleo decides. They are not going to die though, They have an agreement.
Date: April 08 2020 2:53 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity
i forgot to add this but are the olyimpians all women? this is a really good story. makes me incredibly sad for the humans and what they have to go through. it makes it infinitly worse that there is a whole race of these gods so fighting back is hopless. the human races suffering will seem to never end unfortunatly.
Author's Response:
Okay so, this is not something I've gone into with too much detail. The Olympian race in this universe are the same size as humans in their own realm, hence why Cleo originally came through at normal height. Also it will be written soon that only the women have apptiitude for divine magic, because this is a fetish story and Goddesses are awesome.
Date: April 08 2020 2:08 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity
damn cleos a real asshole
Author's Response:
She likes to make sure people know who is in control.
Date: April 07 2020 12:30 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity
Well its been interesting to read. Maybe if togas and sandles get old, Robyn can introduce Cleo to more typs of clowths. Wedge or wedge platform boots (sicne they are way easier to walk in apparently than stilettos), maybe with the wedge out of silvery metal or perfeft white marble, normal peopke make them as if it was war a 30 meter person, get all or perfectly smooth and such, then just use it to make it indestructable and size changing. Maybe build a city inside.
Also indroducing her to skin tight or cat suits, or even some scifi kinds and see what peaks her interest.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback DcZ!
I have setup your idea at the end of the most recent chapter, While I cant promise wedges at the moment, a wardrobe change is now on the cards!
Many thanks
JFT
Date: April 07 2020 4:56 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
Interesting how Cleo's tampering with Robyn's toys made them deperate for their next fix like addicts. If Robyn ever questions the nature of her reality, Cleo can show how pathetic she makes toys vs how Robyn is still normal, just horny.The toy's stamina, strength and speed improvements were intentional changes by Cleo right?
Author's Response:
Heya Panzer,
I just uploaded a chapter with some more of Cleo messing with human bodies, hopefully answers your question without me being so blunt as to just tell you! :)
Thanks for the feedback
JFT
Date: April 06 2020 8:07 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity
This has got to be one of the better stories I've read, and certainly my top favorite that is being updated as we speak!
It seems Robyn has eaten three humans already, it would be fun if she found joy in it - if only swallowing whole. And maybe we'll get some male action in here too someway? Oooh, and more boob-play. Mmmm..
I love it, I wish I was one of these goddesses. Keep it up!
-Sunshine
Author's Response:
Wonderful to have your review! I have to say I enjoyed reading the story you put out!
Robyn's aversion to eating humans will be a running plot im sure! :)
Giant Male is divisive on this site & I am reluctant to include it without having declared it up front and letting people know it was part of it. There will be plenty of men being abused tho.
Boob play is certainly something I can do alot more of!
If there is anything else you would like to see then drop me another review!
The latest story is a short attempt to clear up Robyn's character.
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 05 2020 10:45 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity
This is an awesome story. Hope to see some giga sizes!
Author's Response:
Many thanks for the words of support, I threw in a small plash of Giga for you.
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 05 2020 8:35 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity
That's an interesting way to handle that. And you tied up the loose end of the guys from the first chapter.
Its interesting that the gods are not uniform in power level. There seems to be a wide gulf between Cleo and Leah. I'm assuming the gods are like mortals with powers, so maybe Cleo drawing so much power would be shocking to the higher ups of her race and they would exhibit jealousy or greed. Maybe by the end of the story even her own race are like mortals to her and those friends she elevates with her.
Is the well in a pocket dimension or something? A scene of someone foolish (not knowing or understanding that the power is tied to Cleo) trying to take some power for themselves only to end up self-inflicting a horrible death would be cool. And Cleo getting to judge and mock that person as they scream and melt adding their powers to the well. Maybe they could be an ex or an enemy from home.
So close to a rampage / sex on city scene! You tease us.
Author's Response:
Hey again Panzer,
Cleo is certainly a special case, she was basically forced into taking the position because of her natural talent. Shes growing into the role though!
The well is in a sealed chamber deep in the earth, Leah create it with no points of entry so only Divines could enter.
Enjoy the rampage sex, If the story progresses I imagine i'll be able to get more from other perspectives going forward.
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 01 2020 10:28 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
That chapter was so arousing!! Thank you!!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it
Date: March 31 2020 9:09 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
Awesome giantess!!! Maybe have her put a bunch of tiny people on her body to explore as she lays down, on her back and/or stomach.
Author's Response:
New Chapter, Inspired by this short review, Thanks TinyKev