Date: December 16 2020 2:24 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity
great few chapters!
Date: September 17 2020 1:09 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity
hey! did you abandon this story or are you just stumped? i was really enjoying it
Author's Response:
Well, this revived me! :)
I got busy and had totally forgotten.
This ones for you.
Date: May 31 2020 11:19 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
ya. i also find her reaction to the worship farm interesting. kinda wierd since she gets off at burning humans alive.
Author's Response:
I'll quote myself here,
"Cleo's perspective is still that of a superior being, She is viewing "casual abuse" as benevolent compared what she could(/should?) be doing to them. Or thats how im taking it."
She has never viewed them as much more than a resource.
Date: May 17 2020 7:45 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
Awesome to see you writing again. Adore this setting you've made, it's so perfect! Turning human worship in to a tangilble resource is a great concept.
Love your characters of Cleo and Robyn. Cleo's really interesting considering she's really cold to humans but still gets upset at the concept of a Worship farm. I'd love to see you explore other Goddess' planets and how they've gone about solving their worshipping supply, it seems to be an extremely bleak Universe if Tiana's model is the most popular.
Something I'd like to see in future is Robyn trying to improve the situation for the humans but Cleo becoming jealous of the time she spends with the mortals. Robyn still having a bit of humanity in her could lead to some interesting conflict.
Keep up the great work, always checking in for new chapters! :D
Author's Response:
Awesome to get feedback from you again!
Apologies for the delays in updates, Covid kind of happened which made me busier than normal!
I will be developing Robyn further in future, Shes getting a bit detatched at the moment but there are plans to reconnect her with her roots.
Cleo's perspective is still that of a superior being, She is viewing "casual abuse" as benevolent compared what she could(/should?) be doing to them. Or thats how im taking it.
I am looking at bringing in others from Cleos circle.
Date: April 27 2020 9:17 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
so how technologically adavanced are these olympians?
Author's Response:
Technology is awkward when Magic is a thing.
So Standard of Living is higher, Industry is lower. Overall abilities are obviously higher as they have powerful magic.
JFT
Date: April 26 2020 2:58 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
maybe i should stop talking XD
Author's Response:
No need to stop! :D Even if you do Mortals are still disposable to these girls!
JFT
Date: April 23 2020 5:39 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
nice chapter. i guess now that robyn is a goddess i dont have to feel bade about hating her.
Author's Response:
You're free to hate them all! New Chapter sports lots of casual mortal death, just for you! :D
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 19 2020 4:11 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity
its crazy how i keep on trying to think of a way for humanity to escape there suffering or somehow fight back but its all just hopeless..(unless this was a JRPG XD) i would most likely just kill myself if i were in these humans shoes.
Author's Response:
I think you have a good chance of survival in this world aslong as you live in a blue zone! :)
JFT
Date: April 19 2020 3:42 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity
lordie...crucified humans??? this is horrible. are kids subjegated to the same stuff? ughh. great chappy. funny how i have to watch something positive everytime i finish with one of your chapters now XD. i pray(lol) this wont ever happen irl. or else we are all screwed.
Author's Response:
I feel the opposite, I welcome our beautiful sadistic overlords! :D
Aslong as you feel something im glad, even if its pending dread.
Thanks for the words, keeps me writing!
JFT
Date: April 19 2020 1:05 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
OH i forgot to ask. do your characters have any real life or fictional look alikes? interested in how they look.
Author's Response:
Characters are written deliberatly vague, everyone has thier own view of perfection and im not going to tell people what that should be, I offer defining characteristics so your mind can identify your perfect fit.
Kr - JFT
Date: April 19 2020 12:56 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
oh ok. i was just confused about her intentions
about the new chapter though it was good like all of your chapters. I wanted to see cleos mother for a while. the way goddesses treat humans is terrible. i really hate them. humans are screwed no matter what they do. i like that sort of darkness and despair this story has when you get pass the kinky and sexy stuff. that humans are just destined to suffer. kinda sad when you think about it too much. looking forward to they next chappy
Author's Response:
New Chapter shows just how little human life means to the girls with power, To clarify in the new chatper(Robyn's Divinity), Robyn is outraged at her sister, not feeling sorry for the humans. She doesnt like her youngest sister being so public.
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 18 2020 12:27 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
the response to your response to my response(lol). no i fully know what to expect. its just that cleos intentions are really confusing. like she dosent want humans to be farm animals but she stuff them in a jar in a freezer? its not a problem with the genre of the story but more of a problem with the character. like..it feels that the tiana chapter was made to try and paint cleo as a better person and it works for second until you remember this is the person that killed millions of men,women and children and forced a princeses to destroy her own country and kill her dad mentally breaking her. it just makes her crying in that chapter questionable. this could apply to robyn too. At some moments she is scared about what cleo is doing to humans but was literally the one who was controlling the princess killing all of those men,women,and children.
Author's Response:
I guess I was trying to show perspective. Cleo is trying to rule as a Divine authority, and views tributes, sacrafices & her daily needs as a perk of her chosen method. Tiana was ruling as a Farmer, breeding humans into dosile creatures with no spirit at all. Cleo's issue ith Tiana's method is that to her it feels like a massive waste of human potential.
Shes not pretending to be a nice ruler, she just wanted to show humanity that even with her lusty genocide, shes stil thier better choice.
Robyn is living day to day as if it was her last, she does whatever Cleo wants and tries to enjoy it the most she can. Her perspective on humanity is warped by her proximity to Cleo and the realty of being 400ft tall. Being forced to walk through racks of broken people your own size watching that horror , knowing it could easily be you should circumstances change is going to break someone like Robyn.
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 17 2020 4:56 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
to respond to your response. i see. thhey arent all getting screwed over but alot still are going by cleos diet and sexual urges. i just dont understand why she would be afraid of tianas world but then jamming humans in a jar and putting them in a freezer to cook or blend them. or use them for sexual plesure(all seeming to be innocence who worshipped her). i get that this story is about that stuff but it makes it confusing.
Author's Response:
Just so I understand you, You are looking for a Goddess fetish story without any of the mentioned powerplay? So an extreme gentle Goddess story?
~JFT
Date: April 16 2020 10:04 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity
i dont really see the point of cleo crying and being scared of what tiana does to her humans if what she does to her humans is arguably worse then what tiana does. intreresting chapter
Author's Response:
The difference is that 99% of humanity are left to live thier lives of thier own free will. Shes not reducing the whole population down to mindless farm animals.
Date: April 16 2020 3:53 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity
welp its nice and all she wont treat them like tiana does. but there kinda still getting killed anyway by an arguably more degenarative manner. kinda defeats the point. another good chappy as always
Author's Response:
All things in perspective. Next chapter is another quick maintenance one before we drop into some more playful content again.
Thanks again for the feedback
JFT
Date: April 16 2020 1:29 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
Amzing Story!
I love it!
Author's Response:
Thanks Matrix! Taking the time to leave a small reply is enough to keep me writing!
Date: April 15 2020 9:21 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity
holy.fucking.shit...I...wow..im all fucked up after reading that. i was not expectig that. humans get treated like shit. i thought cleo was bad..jesus christ..its like this with other planets too? this is terrible
damn..actual cows get treated better then that..im actually kinda terrified now.
kids have to go through that hell too? ugh i gotta sleep this off. Amazing chapter. really makes me feel dread
Author's Response:
Yea, you inspired this chapter so you have only yourself to blame! :)
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 13 2020 1:23 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity
welp robyn is a monster now. hate her too
Author's Response:
Reading this made me want to write something adding more story context.
Date: April 11 2020 1:15 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity
i like the dudes idea below me
Author's Response:
Done.
Date: April 09 2020 9:25 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
Since time stopping powers seem to exsist, or some form of time manipulation, maybe Robyn could make mini worlds with more surface aria than earth in petri dishes, full oceons and mountains and continents (with apriopriat resources made at that scale). Than out in each a few thousend loyalist from random places, implnst the knoladge of how to survive snd make civilisation, enshur that they have a orb and some lower scaled but immortal pristess, than time acselerate the petri dish so it grows to billions in a matter if days due to it experienceing so mich more time, have several hundred yeas pass, and Cleo can have many hundreds if bilions to add power to. Make a few hundred petri dishes like this, some maube even larger to the inhabitances, and everything is fine.
Could even apply this to the wedge boots, being haveing many many levels inside it with on orb in each heel to absorb the energy, than make is so so the people and environmens inside can only shrink, being that more room is made every time Cleo or Robyn grows and than shrink appropriately when they decrease themselves in size , then when they arent whearing it or have it in the closet or show storage, time accelerate and get the population insid the heels up.
Or making the sole of a flat this environment.
Author's Response:
I am trying to parse your ideas but they all seem totally seperate to what is currently happening. Have you seen my Charlotte's Universe story? its many chapters and Ive been through alot of this kind of stuff!
Kind regards
JFT