Reviewer: cixelsyd Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2020 9:23 AM Title: Alison's lie

I love your writing style and the devious scenarios you set up are simply amazing. I can't begin to express my appreciation for the way you create a true sense of inevitability and how futile it will be to resist.  And the mind games used to convince the victim that it's due to a misunderstanding or miscommunication is sublime.

However, and this is just personal preference and not a criticism of your stories, I am not a fan of the emphasis on the revolting stenches and gross odors/residues.

When the shrinkee fears feet or has no attraction to feet, and thus mere exposure creates the "torture", then that's fantastic. Sweaty soles and other  types of humiliation and domination are such an entrancing read. That reverie is broken (for me) when the narrative switches from the characters actions and desires into a detailed list of terrible smells and disgusting sensations.

Again, 10/10 for the story itself. I'm just mentioning why I would applaud your writing while not favoriting your tales.

Thanks =)

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for the kind review! If I understood you correctly, you're not a huge fan of the description of the smells themselves? 

Hope you'll like what's coming nonetheless! Lots of actions and desires are planned already :D