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Reviewer: smellinlove Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2021 5:10 PM Title: The beginning

I sincerely hope nothing bad happened to the author as he's been gone a long while now. Its been a year and a half now...

Inconvenient coincidence was incredible and I still hope that it gets updated and see more of Faith alone with her (un) fortunate brother.

As for this story the setup is amazing... I desperate thinking this amazing story will never have more chapters. I regularly check the author's patreon and its as dead there as it is here. Please please please come back Max333 :( 

Reviewer: TheTinyJosh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2021 1:42 PM Title: The beginning


OMG I love this story so much! I have been a huge fan of Inconvenient Coincidence for a few years and this one equals its greatness!

It's such an incredibly arousing piece of writing. I love the personalities of the three girls, especially Melody! She's probably my fav! And I love seeing how every little thing lines up for John's domination by these mighty goddesses!

And the foot stuff. Oh god, I'm in heaven.

I cannot wait for more!!!


Reviewer: roastmugging Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2020 4:34 PM Title: The beginning

My favorite ongoing story right now, great job! I’m a big fan of Inconvenient Coincidence, too.

I’ve been a user of this site for a loooong time (back when it was giantess planet), and I finally went ahead and made an account just to post this.

Can’t wait for a new chapter to finally drop!

Reviewer: dwarves_rule Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2020 10:22 AM Title: The beginning

So as someone who likes humiliation, this feels incedibally gaslighty and cruel. Please tell me at the end they can form actual consenual humiliation play?

Reviewer: Bletch Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2020 5:21 AM Title: The beginning

I was relieved to see a new chapter of this story, keep going!

Reviewer: duck12345 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2020 1:30 AM Title: The beginning

Just binged the few chapters that came out since my last review, still going great I see!

The atmosphere box has so much potential, very very very excited to see what you do with it.

Something I spotted on chapter 4, 'John looked at Sarah, perplexed.' I believe that's supposed to be Alison there. Other than that, not noticed anything.

Thanks for posting this, can't wait for the next part. :)

Reviewer: Omanahan88 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2020 5:13 PM Title: The beginning

Loving the story so far. Can’t wait to see what happens when this atmosphere box comes into play. I’m imagining a sauna like prison but instead of hot steam it’s an oppressive fog of sweat. Great work!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2020 7:59 AM Title: The device

You missed a "his coach" here :)

Reviewer: Bletch Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2020 11:40 PM Title: The beginning

No, I don't see any incoherence so far, as for the build up I expect next chapter Melody will ask John if he saw her collants :P, only to find them misteriously hidden in his drawer

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2020 10:29 AM Title: The beginning

I love your stories! It’s awesome to see the contrast between the playful nonchalant attitude of the giantess (when he shrinks) and the mind- numbing panic and brokenness of the tiny. To his sister and friends, it’s just simple feminine foot stink. To the tiny, it’s a true life-or-death threat that breaks him physically, emotionally, and psychologically. I’d love to see a nightmare scene where he slowly keeps shrinking from the foot stink and have him just waste away at one of their feet!

Author's Response:

Hehe, yep. It's not the same to be the tiny as it is to be the giantess! For the giantesses, it's a playful game. They're having tons of fun! The tiny on the other hand... Oops. 

Maybe I'll include such nightmares in a future story, but as it is now, John has no reason to have them! He doesn't even know about shrinking so far... Hehe

Reviewer: duck12345 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2020 10:22 AM Title: The beginning

New story? From Max333?? I think I may hav died and gone to heaven!

Really glad to see you back writing, especially with such an interesting scenario. When the action gets going, I can tell it's going to be amazing. Don't worry about build up, that just makes the inevitable pay-off all the more delicious. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot duck! Can't wait to read from you again as well! 

Reviewer: cixelsyd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2020 9:23 AM Title: Alison's lie

I love your writing style and the devious scenarios you set up are simply amazing. I can't begin to express my appreciation for the way you create a true sense of inevitability and how futile it will be to resist.  And the mind games used to convince the victim that it's due to a misunderstanding or miscommunication is sublime.

However, and this is just personal preference and not a criticism of your stories, I am not a fan of the emphasis on the revolting stenches and gross odors/residues.

When the shrinkee fears feet or has no attraction to feet, and thus mere exposure creates the "torture", then that's fantastic. Sweaty soles and other  types of humiliation and domination are such an entrancing read. That reverie is broken (for me) when the narrative switches from the characters actions and desires into a detailed list of terrible smells and disgusting sensations.

Again, 10/10 for the story itself. I'm just mentioning why I would applaud your writing while not favoriting your tales.

Thanks =)

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for the kind review! If I understood you correctly, you're not a huge fan of the description of the smells themselves? 

Hope you'll like what's coming nonetheless! Lots of actions and desires are planned already :D

Reviewer: Bletch Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2020 8:38 AM Title: The beginning

The start of this story is brilliant!

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot Bletch! Hope you'll like what's coming next!

Reviewer: FTFeet Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2020 6:54 AM Title: The beginning

Yesssssssss!! This is going to be great, can't wait!

Author's Response:

I hope it is! :D

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2020 12:39 PM Title: The beginning

Great to see you writing again!!!! I’m very intrigued to see where this goes!!!!!!! I’ll try to hit the patreon up soon. $$ is kinda tight due to some.. unnamed event going on in the world right now... That being said plenty of time to read from amazing authors like you and FTfeet. Now need Duck to start writing again and the shrunken scholar among the too many to name amazing people on this site!

Author's Response:

Thanks zbh ! And thanks for considering supporting me, it's really appreciated. Means a lot. 
Hehe, yeah, can't wait for duck to be back as well. Take care !

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