Date: February 26 2008 7:59 PM Title: How It Started
Sorry, I should have put "realism" in quotation marks or perhaps added lack of realism... whatever, you probably get what I mean right?
Anyway, when a story is written, it can either be a good story or a sex story. If it can't be written well, then you better damn well better make the sex good. It's not "sex" when they do it every paragraph.
Writing stories isn't all about "Let's put sex words in every paragraph" or "Let's have the army lose to piss off people like Stylesrj" or something like that. You got to know what you're writing about and take in the good points with the bad.
I'm trying to see if I can be nice. But at the same time, a critical person who will point out some problems and tell you how you can fix them. Of course, in a story like this, there are so many problems that need fixing, and not by hammering a plyboard over it
Date: February 26 2008 3:58 PM Title: How It Started
Realism...? XD. That made me laugh. I didn't know people could breathe in space. There is a limit to suspension of disbelief. Anyway, I'll be blunt. It was generic and...that's it. I could go on but then I'll seem like an asshole.