Date: January 17 2020 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is great stuff. The premise where the giant girl maybe only exists in his head is refreshingly different from the usual fare, and so is her attitude. Plenty of good descriptions, too. When I got to the end I thought it was self-contained but I see it's marked not completed, so I guess there will be more? If so, looking forward to it and if not, I like it as a standalone too.
I actually began writing it not knowing how long it would be exactly, but by the time I got about halfway done with the chapter I began falling in love with writing Audrey's interactions. I still don't know precisely how long this story will end up, but I have at least the next 3 chapters roughly planned out. I could probably just sit here for days writing Audrey scenarios, the possibilities are damn-near endless.