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Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2020 7:15 AM Title: Wins and Losses

Holy crap. You are SUCH a good writer. Last story my butt, no way you can be this good and retire FOREVER. Maybe just a good break :)

Also, I feel like Paul, was MVP. He did keep the team well-fed all week long...

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2020 1:55 PM Title: Wins and Losses

"he experienced an event that would change the nature of his life here". I think he and Brie are about to get very intimate... you know what would be interesting? Paul ending up under her foot or vagina and making Brie experience extreme bliss without knowing that it's her brother down there. Paul wasn't supposed to join the team celebration - Brie didn't commanded him to undress and play along. It was the team - and when she realizes what happened, she starts to freak out, after all it's one thing to tease Paul for fun and other completely different to actually climax because of him. Worse: she wants more and she knows their mother will kill both if she ever finds out... I guess Paul will have no choice but to stay as her property forever... kkkkk

Another great chapter. Can't wait for the next one! 

Reviewer: hawk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2020 1:03 AM Title: Wins and Losses

more than great stories I loved it . I like Brie Role over Paul I enjoyed it also the story was amazing keep on

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