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Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2020 6:42 AM Title: The Mashers

Another amazing chapter! I hope you keep this pacing and flow going - it's neither too slow or rushed, simply perfect!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2020 10:15 PM Title: The Mashers

I am horrified by the treatment that Paul receives from the whole family. I understand that one or two members might not get along, but mom and Sarah are two ice-cold bitchs, while Brie is a nymphomaniac who uses tinies for pleasure - and I totally hope to see Paul getting really intimate with Brie and her feet XDD, after all, she is the opposite of Sarah, so I am guessing she isn't as cold and uncarrying but quite impulsive and reckless.

Someone sugested and I liked the idea of Paul turning out to be really good at soccer, becoming the ace of the team. In other words, find his place as a tiny. So much that he starts taking over as Brie favorite. That might bring in some conflict, and I don't mean only for Paul. While Brie might tease, Paul is still her brother and feeling aroused for him is bound to invite a mix of guilty and pleasure as well as possessiveness over him, witch can collide with other bigs like Hannah, Jen and even his mother.

Oh yes, his mother. It would be quite scandalous if someone got wind that her daughter is 'forcing' her shrunken brother into an incestuous and bussiness relationship. The mother would have to step in again, blame Sarah for handing Paul to Brie and agree to hand Paul to Hannah for the time being - against Brie and Jen will, obviously.

Also, if the shrinking virus still affecting the population, we can assume a cure is being researched, right? I thought about this when Paul confused Sarah for Katelyn.

Great work. Thank you for always updating so quickly and for sharing your tallent with us.

 

Reviewer: gtsfan4321 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2020 9:02 PM Title: The Mashers

I'm really liking the Brie/Paul portion of the story. Much more direct interaction between Paul and the full-sized Brie vs the minimal interaction with Sarah.  I really hope that this portion of the story can last a little while.  I'm hoping for some foot action - maybe somehow she blames him for them losing the game and punishes him somehow - or just like this chapter, just makes him rub her feet for her own arousal.  In any case, this story is already a classic and I hope it lasts for a much longer time - so much more to explore, especially with multiple full-size characters he hasn't interacted with yet (his mom, Jen, and Hannah).  In fact, Brie sounds like she wants to playfully humiliate him, maybe by inviting Jen over for a bit.

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