Date: October 30 2023 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
These are really fun ideas. I'd love to see a continuation with more detail. The ideas are great but I'd love to see the scenes fleshed out more.
Date: April 11 2023 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 5
So many names thrown about in that last chapter, it is a bit hard to keep tract of who is whom.
Love your story so far, and am interested to read where it goes.
You asked in a reply to my previous comments if I would be interested "If you want to try to do a co-author thing or a sequel let me know."
First, I have a lot of time constraints, and can NOT commit to a lot of devotion to any story. Any collaboration would have to take place over an undetermined amount of time I can not commit to.
Second, the subject matter of such a collaboration would have to be determined between us; and most likely be altered as the story progresses.
With this in mind, and with your agreement, such a LONG TERM story would be a nice project to proceed with you.
Go to https://www.deviantart.com/hertoering and write me a message about the type of story you wish to write, including subject matter and participants.
Let's see where any collaboration goes from there.