Reviewer: Kamaeli Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2019 8:18 AM Title: Fame

Wow, great start!

 

I'm impressed at how quickly you produced multiple chapters right from the beginning. Neat concept, and I admire the creativity with the different ways the cities have been destroyed so far. I'm really liking Natalie but I'm also eager to see what other characters will bring to the table (especially curious about what Tessa will be like). They don't stand a chance against two girls!

 

I'll be following this one closely, and I'm sure others are too,. Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your review. This review motivates me to finish up the next chapter hopefully tomorrow!

Thessa will be a different character than Natalie as she is based of a friend of mine. I still have plenty of chapters already planned out I just have to write them down.

Thanks for your interest