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Reviewer: Untouched Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2020 3:49 PM Title: The Jar

This chapter surprised me in a few ways. I hadn't imagined Eiko still being in her clothes after the events of the first chapter. And to think that her phone survived too!

It seemed a bit strange that as a result of her being stuck, pressure just kept building in Daniel's penis until she was shot out like a cannon ball. As well as him hearing her threats while she was trapped inside him. But this is fantasy, so I shouldn't nitpick about that.

Considering how indifferent Daniel has been towards Eiko so far, I'd say that she's really in for it now that he's seeing her more clearly. Though, I hope he doesn't get violent with her. It's nice to see her feisty and in good spirits even after a few near death experiences.

It looks like her friend Jane is as scatterbrained as she sounded on the phone. Hopefully she'll find her way to Eiko soon enough. Though, I'm very interested to see what's on Daniel's list. Looking forward to chapter three! 

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