Date: July 11 2020 10:09 PM Title: Double Punishment
Just read through this story and it's very exciting. Although I do get a bit confused as to the size of the tiny's. Big enough to have doll clothes to wear and get stuck in a fleshlight, but small enough to be cock vored all the way in and then back out eventually. The 2 girls loudly, and somewhat painfully for a neighbor in the dorm, get into his room and and no one mentions of it to authorities who should be looking for them. Parents, sibling, teachers and friends don't just not report their family member is missing. Seems a lot would lead to this guy. But other than those issues, I can't wait to see what happens next in the story. Thanks for writing it and sharing it with us.
Date: June 30 2020 3:49 PM Title: The Jar
This chapter surprised me in a few ways. I hadn't imagined Eiko still being in her clothes after the events of the first chapter. And to think that her phone survived too!
It seemed a bit strange that as a result of her being stuck, pressure just kept building in Daniel's penis until she was shot out like a cannon ball. As well as him hearing her threats while she was trapped inside him. But this is fantasy, so I shouldn't nitpick about that.
Considering how indifferent Daniel has been towards Eiko so far, I'd say that she's really in for it now that he's seeing her more clearly. Though, I hope he doesn't get violent with her. It's nice to see her feisty and in good spirits even after a few near death experiences.
It looks like her friend Jane is as scatterbrained as she sounded on the phone. Hopefully she'll find her way to Eiko soon enough. Though, I'm very interested to see what's on Daniel's list. Looking forward to chapter three!
Date: June 29 2020 10:20 AM Title: New Home
Wow! I really like the premise for this story. Daniel's demeanor sure changed in Eiko's perspective after the shrink. She had no idea he was capable of acting on his feelings in this way. But he doesn't seem sadistic or cruel in any way, which is nice. He's completely oblivious to her feelings, but she's still unharmed.
I think that she may have agreed to more than just being shrunk in that consent form she blindly signed. You have to be careful with those terms and conditions. Sometimes you may just end up signing your life away.
I'm glad he's chosen to keep her shrunk and close. Many stories with vore like this end in death for the tiny, but that's always a turn-off for me.
Date: December 31 2019 5:40 AM Title: Small Inconvenience
Oh my goodness! After reading this chapter, I haven’t been so excited for the next chapter to a story in quite a long time! Hope it comes soon but I know you can’t rush perfection. I hope Daniel isn’t as careful with the other two girls and views them as disposable, especially if he cruelly and tortuously disposed of them in front Eiko, to mentally torture her and further get revenge