Date: December 20 2019 2:24 PM Title: Toy Janet
this is absolutely delightful! the most recent chapter is great, and i'd love to see what more your imagination can come up with. don't hold back - after all, they're not real people, right~?
[Report This]Date: December 02 2019 8:44 PM Title: James' World
I'm loving this by now!
Date: November 30 2019 6:17 PM Title: Ann
I hadn't realized Sharon plays with their minds so much.
It could be an interesting twist if instead of saying how much Chris and Ann love one another, they instead state how much they both love Sharon; and then make love while each of them think about Sharon, either freely or not.
Sharon could ask them afterwards which was better, being in love with each other while having sex, or being in love with and thinking of her while having sex with each other.
It would be nice to hear some prayer sessions to Sharon.
Oh, putting the drive, their entire existance in her back pocket was a great touch. Perhaps Sharon could put the drive elsewhere on her body such as in her clevage.
You have a unique concept going on here, please continue on.
Author's Response:
Glad you're liking it so far!
I wound up making the next chapter be about prayers to her. In looking after a world with so many people in it, prayers just seems like the most practical way to interact with them without having to worry about things like burning out socially :p
Date: November 28 2019 12:57 AM Title: Newcomer
Your story are so cool! Some of them easely in my top 5 of my favorite story of all time ! :D
Please continue if you can, you have real talent :)
Date: November 20 2019 4:02 PM Title: Newcomer
Great start!
Can't wait to rewd the rest. I am a huge fan of all ypur stories.
I really hope you finish "A tomboys planet" because that one is my favorite!
Thanks for all the great stories.
Date: November 19 2019 6:04 PM Title: Newcomer
Very cool concept. It's also one of the most mystifying as the tinies have no actual size since they are all digitized onto her computer drive. Sharon could be any size, even conceivably small compared to her volunteered captives, or huge beyond their comprehansion. You made the possibilities endless.
The same holds true for Sharons' power over their wills and actions, she has complete power over them.
I am curious how Sharon will be able to interact with her devoted worshippers on an actual physical level. Perhaps Sharon has a room / sphere / sensory deprivasion tank-chamber she can enter and have her worshippers appear as virtual holograms like 3D printing so they can feel and sense one another.
It would be nice to hear about the actual digitizing process. Are Sharons' volunteers diced up and sucked in by a laser like Tron, or some other process?
Can't wait to read more about their interactions with Sharon their Goddess, and her "MILF" mindest at being a Goddess to so many men {women?} devoted to her.
Date: November 19 2019 2:18 PM Title: Newcomer
Will you ever go back to A Tomboys Planet or The Kelly 50?
Author's Response:
Definitely! These past 6 months have been real busy for me, but eventually I'll come back to them. Small planets are great!
Date: November 18 2019 2:58 PM Title: Newcomer
I'm liking this so far.