[Report This]Date: November 25 2019 6:44 PM Title: First Test
I love ideas like this. The pool really gives Agatha a lot of options to have fun and explore a lot of potential in this story.
I really enjoy the bit where she doesn't seem to care about the tiny civilization in her scrying room. I hope we get to hear more about them along with the adventures she is about to have. Also really like the description of Agatha, great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Agatha will have many more adventures in the future, and as for the civilization she stole, I think they have one or two stories left in them.
Date: November 13 2019 12:37 AM Title: First Test
Interesting concept this scrying pool.
It has potential for a lot of stories and fun stuff!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah, I've got a lot of ideas and half-ideas for it swirling around, waiting to be turned into stories.
Date: November 04 2019 6:30 PM Title: First Test
Nice! Very Nice!
Agatha "the Black Hearted" sounds like the type of self-absorbed Giantess that defines the unaware genre even if she does destroy tinies knowingly. It's her complete detachment from human suffering and indifference to her victims that makes her such an incredibly unaware Giantess.
I really like the fact she desposited Marcus on her floor just to ignor his existance.
The scrying pool dimension play is great. Perhaps she could reroute some of the exscape portals of "thieves and assassins" to positions of subservience to Agatha {e.g. exit portals between her toes, in her stomach, on her clit, or up her butt as possibilities should you so choose}.
Author's Response:
I really appreciate the enthusiasm!
The idea that her victims are "human" is something that barely even registers to Agatha, as becomes clear later. They're just a means to an end for her. I went in a different direction with it than your suggestion, but I think you'll like how it ends up anyway.
[Report This]Date: November 04 2019 11:41 AM Title: First Test
Aww, the poor little village is gone. Now she can't get to know it :(
Well, at least the village has been wiped out by a powerful witch and not by a teenager throwing dirty socks throug the portal like in that other story.
Let's hope the tiny and the goddess can be friends.
Also, thank you for writing!
Author's Response:
Really, that village got off easy compared to what'll happen to other towns. Witches can be quite powerful, and their agendas are secrets.
And thank YOU for reviewing!
Date: November 03 2019 11:04 PM Title: First Test
A very good story! I can't wait to see where it will go next!
Author's Response:
Thanks! You won't have to wait long.
Date: November 03 2019 1:37 PM Title: First Test
Well certainly a great start.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Hopefully it has a good middle and end, too.