Date: October 04 2019 7:32 PM Title: Demonstration
Ah, the Tsundere, a classic. For some it's cliche, for me, the reason it's so common, is because there's always a compelling storyline waiting to be tapped. I've always liked the Hey Arnold! kind of stories where the bane of the character's existence ends up loving them the most.
Admittedly, I'm not a fan of first-person, but that's more of a stylistic preference. It does this story credit, and keeps the pace going. Definitely, if there's going to be a future installment, it would be fun to see things from Meredeth's perspective.
Author's Response:
Or, as part of their bully/victim relationship, she came to appreciate him after she started bullying him, and it became a post-fact justification for her actions. She doesn't like him any less, it just developed once she started spending a lot more time around him.
I really like the first-person perspective, since it gives the reader an opportunity to put themslves in the protagonist's situation. If I were to do one from Meredith's perspective, which wouldn't be the first one but a bit down the road, it'd still be first-person as the giantess in the situation. Then at least readers, whom I presume are mostly in the shrunken man role, can put themslves into the role of her tiny man as she looks down on him. Honestly I can see that having legs, enough for a story or two at least.
[Report This]Date: October 03 2019 8:28 PM Title: Demonstration
Holy shit this was the cutest fucking shit ive read in a while, this was like a very need palate cleanser from some of the other stuff ive read on this site so thank you for this. I would love these characters returning at some point but im looking forward to what else you write next.
Author's Response:
Haha, my work has been called a lot of things, but I think this is a first for cute. They'll be back for sure, I had so much fun writing them I couldn't close the book on them yet, but their further adventures are better suited for other stories. My other stuff may not be as cute, but I hope you enjoy it all the same. : )
[Report This]Date: October 03 2019 9:05 AM Title: Demonstration
Finally got around to reviewing this and can definitely say that these two are cute together. Glad to see Meredith burst out of her cruel shell and show her true and playful personality to the protag. I'm wondering how they go public with their relationship once the weekend is over. I imagine our hero will fabricate some sort of story.
Author's Response:
Playful giantesses are the absolute best, so I try to make mine mostly playful with a hint of mean. They'll be able to go public with it just fine :)
Date: October 02 2019 2:11 PM Title: Demonstration
Yessss, it's a thing!
The teasing really was leading up to a dopey (but ultimately still teasing) confession! AWESOME STUFF! Can't wait for the next chapter, gonna have to check out your other stories in the mean-time.
Author's Response:
If you think about it, she actually confessed twice, she just had to play it off as a cruel joke the first time ; )
I encourage you to go read (and review!) all my stuff, especially if you like this one.
[Report This]Date: October 02 2019 11:57 AM Title: Demonstration
I normally don't comment much on stories just because...Well I don't haha. But you've been doing very good with this. The demeaning dialogue from Meredith is both very hot and smug but also flows pretty naturally. Helps the rest is well written too.
You keep teasing me with those more micro sizes too haha, but color me impressed. Can't wait to see where you go with this one.
Author's Response:
Well, thanks for breaking your no-commenting streak! I appreciate getting feedback on stuff, it's really the only "payment" i get for this. Meredith is amazingly smug, but I think that naturally comes with the giantess superiority complex.
Micro sizes are the best : ) Glad you're looking forward to more!
Date: October 02 2019 5:37 AM Title: Demonstration
I knew it, I was right! She's in love with her victim!
Author's Response:
Love might be a bit strong, but she's definitely crushing!
Date: September 30 2019 6:35 AM Title: Demonstration
I'm more and more convinced this is actually her way to show that she's in love with him <3
Author's Response:
She wants to just hug him until he goes pop!
Date: September 29 2019 4:55 PM Title: Demonstration
They seem to have a co-dependence streak going on between them. If their relationship continues to develop in a submissive, rough, but not overly violent fashion; I wonder if we'll see some genuine affection and protectiveness from Meredith. To qoute Mean Girls "It's only funny when I say that". A scene where she lets him slip into danger from others and has to rescue her "toy" could hint or reveal if this relationship is one they can both enjoy and develop, or if she's one bad day away from snuffing him out for her own satisfaction.
Author's Response:
That's a pretty solid read on their relationship! If Meredith saw someone else trying to horn in on her territory she would get very upset and turn her wrath on them before going back to her favorite toy. As to how it develops, you'll just have to keep reading to find out.
Date: September 28 2019 1:20 PM Title: Demonstration
I really like where this is going so far! I’d love to see some footplay from Meredith! Her giantess “dirty talk” is phenomenal!
Author's Response:
Thanks! You'll get your wish before the story's over.