Reviewer: tuyulboy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2008 12:37 PM Title: The cause of death

...she with gastronomic hunger, I with the desire to be eaten..

... cast my eyes down in abject respect only to be confronted by her superb thighs, her dress-hem stretched across only just keeping things PG.  I felt faint with a strong passion, wanted to fall to my knees and bury my head under that skimpy canopy and worship her feminine alter, abase myself between her thighs with the knowledge or hope that eventually she might be swallowing me and, after long last, the process will commence of blending me into her immaculate body.... 

i love this scene, i just hope jake or one of other 'food' come willingly with the desire to be eaten.. and they get 'fourplay' get into beautifull mouth..

Author's Response: that section of the chapter was written by banfield. it was good wasn't it? glad you liked it and thank you for writing a review. i will be adding more sooner or later