[Report This]Date: September 11 2019 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
This first chapter left me with so much hope that he would become her slave or pet in the next chapter. I loved everything about it and I still imagine world where he did become her and her friends foot massager and servant.
[Report This]Date: September 04 2019 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
This one really needs another chapter!
Author's Response:
There's another chapter I promise. This is a two parter, will have the finale up by the weekend.
Date: September 04 2019 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Tell me there will be a chapter 2 to this story :O
Author's Response:
There will be, I promise. Its finished and on my editing pile. Will be ready by the weekend.
Date: September 03 2019 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
You always manage to capture the sheer fucking terror of extreme power imbalances, but here you outdid yourself. Maybe it’s the particular scales used here (I have a weakspot for micro/nano content), or maybe it’s the terrifying mix of apathy and pity, probably a bit of both honesty. It felt both hot and existentially terrifying and that’s really what all good cruel size boils down to.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback, you are very kind.
I agree with you regarding the balance of power. There's a temptation to think that we could somehow be heroic or find a way to turn the tables. Ultimately unless you can move faster than a fifty foot hand can slap down, you're pretty screwed.
In the end, as much as we enjoy them, i think these are tales of horror.
[Report This]Date: September 03 2019 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was a great one! I'm disappointed it is already over! I was kind of hoping she would bring her tiny roommate dancing with her, preferably in her bra or her butt, but the gum thing was unique so that was cool. I think it would be neat if you continued this and had her peel him off the following day and decide what she wants to do with him. Maybe she decides to just keep him for herself, knowing anything else is certain death?
Author's Response:
Thanks for your feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed it. the ticking of the 'Complete' button was a mistake, I promise you the second and final part will be uploaded before the weekend.