Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2019 5:28 AM Title: Zara's New Home

I am impressed to say the least and I hope you continue this story. You are working with many complex concepts and ideas regarding the war and Devex, and I doubt you will let everything as black and white, good and evil.

As you have shown us, Zara has urges, her predatory instincts towards humans looming over her interaction with Cashel. Than there is Edward and the enigmas he left behind. First about Zara being infatuated of Cashel, a never seen phenomenon (is it just infatuation or there is more to it than meets the eye?). Second, the liberation of more Devex. The bunker can handle 3 Devex, so sooner or later we will get to see Cashel interacting with another blue giantess and Zara interacting with a male Devex.

So far, the story is great at building up tension. Hope you can continue as soon as possible (my curiosity is at its peak with this and other stories of the site XDD).

Thank you for sharing your talent and imagination with us.