[Report This]Date: December 26 2019 3:31 PM Title: Chapters 8 to 12 ... 8-29-19
Please do a part 2 with this, hopefully with some butt or inner-body stuff!
Date: September 11 2019 5:15 AM Title: Chapters 8 to 12 ... 8-29-19
I love this story!
I created an account just so i could leave a review!
Can you please continue it! Its soo good. I love that you are now making him even smaller still! YES!
Also, I was wondering... could I pay you to write? I love it that much!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Nugget, for reading/commenting. I'm glad you like the story. I don't do pay to write, so that's not what I would do. Some people here may do that, like Jacksmith.
I don't plan to do anymore writing at the moment. You can read my other stories. They are all somewhat similar in style.
I really don't know if I will do more writing ever again. But if I do, I'll try to include at least one chapter of this story... because of your interest. Thanks again.
[Report This]Date: September 02 2019 7:01 AM Title: Chapters 8 to 12 ... 8-29-19
An interesting story. Enjoyed most of it - I found some of the interactions/behaviour a little chaotic, oten bouncing between moods too quickly or overreacting to events. Also it's all been a bit PG rated so far!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting. I get what you're saying about moods. That's on purpose for the excitement of it (not meant to be too realistic) yet it was a challenge and I also thought it was chaotic at times. I agree it is a bit PG to PG-13. The character's personality prevented going further.
Date: August 30 2019 3:48 AM Title: Chapters 8 to 12 ... 8-29-19
That was awesome. Really hoping you continue with this. Maybe he could even get super tiny in the FS1000 and she swallows it, giving him a fantastic voyage through her body.
Author's Response:
I thought of him being swallowed, but I'm more into mouthplay. But swallowing I like if just mentioned briefly. Thanks for commenting.
[Report This]Date: August 29 2019 10:16 PM Title: Chapters 8 to 12 ... 8-29-19
This was a great part one. Loved the ending with the reveal that he can get even smaller like the size of dust, or maybe smaller than that. No problem with my idea being put on hold. Now that I know more about the shrink ray I definitely think the thong part should be saved for when she puts him to the smallest size possible ;). Hope you decide to make a part two, great story:D
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your comments. I appreciate it.
Date: August 29 2019 9:08 PM Title: Chapters 8 to 12 ... 8-29-19
I absolutely love this story and really hope you continue it! I feel there's just so much more territory left to be included particularly now that Cassandra has fully embraced shrinking him...maybe to really tiny sizes! Maybe she'll shrink a whole city! I would also still love to see more footplay with bare feet included, especially as she already teased him with her toes! As she is walking towards him as the chapter ends, maybe she is barefoot with toes like houses! Great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for reading/commenting This story didn't get as many favorites as my other stories.