Date: August 16 2019 9:11 PM Title: The Good Doctor
I deleted my last two reviews because I wanted to summarize my ideas into a smaller text and because I thought 3 reviews in a roll would be too much, among other reasons I explain at the end. So, now that both sisters think they are goddess when compared to tinies... I just fell sorry for Max. Not only because of the torture, but, because he trully cares for these cruel and mean girls. Liked how you worked the conflict betwen Max will and his body reactions.
Now, I still think you are cooking something big with the sisters and their relationship with Max. I would love to see a love triangle involving Max, Liz and Megan or Ashley. There is planty of material from all chapters to backup the idea that, yes, Ashley or Megan (or both) harbour feelings for Max, and the next or last arc could be about it. Don't know, but I would love to see it.
Also, after seeing how the sisters just tortured and abandoned him, it would be good to see Megan and Asley to suffer the worst way someone can suffer: in their minds, eaten by guilty and shame from what they did to their brother.
That is it. Sorry for the last two reviews. Together they were far too long and too medling into details from the story, so I deleted them. Lets wait and see what you have in store. Having to wait for the chapters is making me hate the weekends kkkkkkkkk. As always, thank you for your hard work in bringing us this story that is already a gem of this site. I can only speak for me, and I am very grateful :)
Author's Response:
I appreciate your frequent reviews, and I've found it very interesting to read your predictions and compare them to what I have planned out. And I do not mind the long reviews one bit. I find this community to be incredibly supportive and it's you folks that have made it so much fun for me to write this story.
And don't worry too much about having to wait through the weekends. I'm making good progress on the story and we are definitely nearing the end. And not having to worry about posting on weekends makes it a lot easier to write the quality of content that I want to put out.
I appreciate you and the rest of the community sitcking through to the finish with me. I hope you enjoy what I have in store for our characters and thank you so much for all the support!