Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2019 9:57 PM Title: The Road Trip

Most important: I would like to thank you, not only for the story, but for keeping updating almost daily and with such a high quality. Your imagination and skills are amazing. Please, keep it up. Hope my comments can, if not help, at least motivate you to keep going. Once again, thank you and don't be afraid to write what and how you like! Life is often boring and bound by rules. That is why fiction and art exist - to exercise our imagination, our freedom and have some good time!

I am betting my chips that you are not done telling us obout the past of Megan and Max, and that it plays a big role in who she is now and how she really fells. A good way of doing that would be to show her thoughts and actions in the many phases Max go when shrinking. How she fells about it. For example: guilty (she did wish for him to shrink), desire for him and envy (of how Max prefers Asley).

Megan and Max are right now my favorite chracters and their interactions are always interesting for moving the story and rising the tension for future events.

Author's Response:

I want to say thanks for all the support you've shown. You're reviews are absolutely helping to keep me motivated and while I dont reply instantly, just know that each review is read and appreciated. 

 

I do plan on adding in more of the "Memories" sort of chapters where we see the various interactions between a variety of characters, but I got so wrapped up in the main story that I just had to keep writing and posting those chapters. I'm glad that people are enjoying the Megan and Max dynamic though! I was planning on focusing just on Ashley when I started but Megan became super important to fill in the time between Ashley being Max's guardian and Ashley starting to "fulfill Max's perversions."

 

Again, thank you so much for being such an outspoken supporter. You are appreciated!