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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2019 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 2: Time to Make Some Choices

OMG! This is so awesome!!

Reviewer: Sheograth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2019 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 2: Time to Make Some Choices

I think you're doing an awesome job for your first story!

You making branching paths will definitely make more work for you, but it'll make the overall story stand out more, so keep strong with it.

Both choices sound interesting to me. Thpugh I do like Akari's tomboyish nature, so I'll lean toward that version.

Good luck with your story!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback! I'm a big fan of your work and that was what kinda inspired me to do the story with multiple routes.

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