Date: March 25 2024 1:25 PM Title: Performance Review
What an incredible story! Thank you for sharing it. It's had a significant impact on motivating me to start writing
Date: April 29 2021 8:38 PM Title: Performance Review
Great story , I normaly do not like crush stories. This one has a great theme and strong character development
Date: March 09 2021 8:47 PM Title: Performance Review
You need to give us the story of the aftermath of the whole thing. I really enjoyed the story. This is my first time leaving a review I think.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I just might. Been thinking about this story lately.
Date: July 20 2020 7:30 AM Title: Performance Review
Being a teenager, I bet that Sasha would be easily brainwashed by Naomi's mindset, becoming more cruel than her "teacher".
Date: June 09 2020 1:45 PM Title: Performance Review
God I love this story so much!! The last two chapters are pure gold! Mary using her size to play with her little husband and feeling that power was conveyed so well! Kinda really hoping Sasha gets her turn being big even if it's not permanent!
Author's Response:
I'm really happy you like it! Thanks for reading and I hope you continue liking it!
Date: December 19 2019 4:05 PM Title: Performance Review
It was beyound stupid at lest have pepole seem human
Author's Response:
I figured I'd respond to both of your reviews here. Your “review” leads me to believe that you didn’t really read the story, or, if you did, you didn’t understand what you were reading. William is trying to save his family, but things are blowing up in his face. He doesn’t understand how the world he lives in works. Also, you're not supposed to like him... I don't. Either way, I don’t know why your spamming everybody’s stories with super negative comments or “reviews”.
[Report This]Date: December 09 2019 8:40 AM Title: Performance Review
Your story is incredible, I love Mary's subplot and how she behaves being giantess, I hope to see more chapters with eagerness.
Author's Response:
She is very conflicted for sure! Thank you for liking it and leaving a comment, I appreciate it! I hope you continue to like future chapters as well.
Date: December 07 2019 5:22 AM Title: Performance Review
I know this is a story for fun and probably shouldn't be over analyzed but who in their right mind would work for such a company? Naomi is so volatile and random you can be killed just by sheer coincidence of being in her path at the wrong time or for any number of reasons.
Author's Response: Haha! True! But like you said, it’s just for fun. But still... should probably make it more appealing to work there!
[Report This]Date: November 05 2019 3:18 PM Title: Performance Review
Wow!! This is the best story I have read in a long long time!!!!
I hope you write more!! I really loved that Mary’s shoe of choice was converse!!! I’d like to read more about her using those to squish more tiny people! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Awesome! Glad to hear you liked it!
Date: October 24 2019 10:17 PM Title: Performance Review
Great new chapter! I'm curious, will a later chapter contain a scene of a person trapped inside one of Naomi's high heels?
Author's Response: Thank you! And absolutely it will!
[Report This]Date: October 23 2019 1:44 PM Title: Performance Review
I love the idea of this story. The originality is great. I especially liked when Mary goes through the portal and is so regretful of her actions, it's refreshing to see that in a well written piece.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I appreciate your kind words!
[Report This]Date: August 12 2019 4:00 AM Title: Performance Review
Simple at first glance but carrying on depth. Great concept. Cool, straight-forward style. Love it, and I am only just through chapter 1.
Author's Response:
Man, seeing your name pop up was like seeing a celebrities name! I have loved your Saturn Seven story for years! And I am thrilled you like the story so far.
[Report This]Date: July 17 2019 7:11 AM Title: Performance Review
You’ve done an amazing job in the character development of Naomi!! The feet and vore centric stuff has been so incredibly well written
What was missing for me was some of the perspective details. Like when Naomi walks around I’d love to hear how the vibrations effect the little people, or the details of her feet when she takes off her heels (smell, taste, look). These are personal biases though
Great story, looking forward to more chapters
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words!
You what's funny? I orginally had more details like that in the early draft of this story but I removed most of them because I felt they were too cliche or repetitive. But this is a giantess story after all... so maybe I'll go back and add those subtle details. But I will take your suggestion to heart with future chapters moving forward for sure. Thank you for your input, I really appreciate the feedback.
Date: July 14 2019 8:24 AM Title: Performance Review
This story took an awesome and interesting turn in chapter two! Super excited to see where it goes! Nice work!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope you like were it goes!
Date: July 12 2019 6:53 PM Title: Performance Review
To a review I accidently deleted!
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the characters. It is a challenge to write a giantess that is interesting and not typical or bland. I appreciate your feedback. Don't be afraid to give me suggestions or ideas to make them more interesting and intriguing.
[Report This]Date: July 06 2019 1:05 AM Title: Performance Review
Terrific, I'd love to read more about her.
Author's Response:
Thank you!