Date: June 28 2019 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well now, really curious to see how his adoptive family and the GPF treat him going forward. I have a feeling that since he holds the password to killing the information leak, and he might not be in a cooperative mood when he wakes back up, that his punishment ordeal might not be over. I can see the GPF ordering him to be tortured into compliance, and his mother carrying it out "for the greater good", leaving his sister as the only one who can't bring herself to do anymore to him.
Date: June 28 2019 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
Man this is really a good story and I hoping caleb make it out alive and maybe start up a revolution against the giantess and be able to get some new hands (all thanks to giantess technology) but if he dies that video will get out to the public and the people will start one cause the giantess are blind to thwir flaws and maybe this video will open there eyes but it will be to late
[Report This]Date: June 28 2019 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really novel story, enjoying both the smut and the general narrative. It's a shame this doesn't have more reviews or reads! I'm excited to see what happens next!
[Report This]Date: June 27 2019 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Usually, cruelty isn't my cup of tea at all. But here it works smoothly because of the larger story and the development of the characters, who aren't just shallow asses.
I wonder, however, how the truth will break out. I guess the true criminal could have hacked into the house cameras - if there is any - and send it for the world to see. It would utterly destroy the Giantesses image of benevolent and wise rulers and qhatter the souls of the two main women of the story. In any case, it seems that the end is nigh and I can't wait to read it.
Date: June 27 2019 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
I want to see Rachel break in tears when she finds out she hurt an innocent man. But, it’s your story so do what you feel is good. I just thought it would be a better ending.
[Report This]Date: June 11 2019 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a very good story. We don't have to kid ourselves, most people come here for smut and many stories which try to integrate plot overdo it and become boring. This story has the right balance, just the right amount of complexity and I've genuinely got some investment in the plot.
But I'm still here for the smut, and that is well done and everything is integrated smoothly.
Date: June 10 2019 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
This story is really great so far, I'm loving the interaction ( even if scat isn't really my thing )
I do hope though that Caleb gets to eventually prove his innocence, it'd be great seeing how the Giantess' reacts to having unjustly tortured him for crimes he didn't commit and how they'd go about making amends.