Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23 2019 4:21 AM Title: The Apprentice's Mix up

Excited for part 2! I'm also very interested to see how growth might play into part 2 given your 500 to 5000 foot tag in the summary.  Now that Joana knows the secret to how John shrinks, she might use it to grow herself into a giantess which would make for a really terrific storyline and bring Gaby and John's relationship back together in a whole new way. Whether Gaby or Joana ultimately grows that large, it will definitely be foot fun for the whole city! Great work!