Reviewer: ThetinMaster Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2019 8:19 AM Title: Privileged Protest

Great stuff! It would be nice if you wrote more and expanded more about how emma "protests" abt human lives while showing hipocrasy like her kiss box It would be great if u showed more of that

Author's Response:

The story is about to come back around to that, I detoured a little bit to expand the world, although Emma is about to put 'back on task' to protest equality.

 

Thanks for the feedback :) (next chapter is Jenna tho)

 

JFT

Reviewer: vicgiantessadmirer Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2019 9:20 PM Title: Privileged Protest

Two things, one, are there any tiny extremist groups? sorry, just a thought. two, about that story request, (I am surprised I have not found this anywhere on this site, or any other site), Did you ever see the magic school bus? (That is how I found out I like this) Specifically the one about the water cycle where they were transformed into tiny little water droplets? I think someone turning into a drop water (ice, gas, and well... water) has lots of potential. great story btw

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I plan to bring in a potent extremist group, Shed more light on the workings behind the scenes that converted Emma.

I have thought about how I would write the story request, (I looked up the episode) and I think I know how i would write a mini-story to that concept. It is in my todo queue! I cant promise on when though.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2019 5:12 PM Title: Privileged Protest

This is a protest I can get behind.

Author's Response:

You seem to be in the minority :) None of her friends can get behind her!