[Report This]Date: November 02 2019 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 10: Dinner Date
I really like where this is going. You are doing a great job building up the tension for them. Having him save himself on the train fruitlessly really did a great job of escalting the circumstances and now that she's here seeing the squalor he live in and taking away his last safe haven I just cant wait to see whst comes next. Whether its her first moment of genuine mercy or sympathy or his final and complete surrender to her it will be momentus. Really curious to see whats going on with her fb relationship as well as why she has such a twisted thing for small guys. I am ok with rooting for him and having you play with my emotions all throughout this story its really immersive actually lol.
Author's Response:
Thanks, i'm glad to hear you're enjoying it. i was hoping it would be a little immersive writting from first person
[Report This]Date: October 31 2019 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 10: Dinner Date
Damn. I wasn't sure at the start of the story. She is so abrasive. Now though it feels like she is lonely because of a situation if some kind.
Almost like she's wanting to force him into a relationship. Not sure she has had sex before either.
Looking it more as it goes on. Definitely plenty of intrigue.
Author's Response:
A lot more will be explained as it goes on
Thanks for the interest
Date: October 30 2019 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 10: Dinner Date
It's nice that she has reverted back to being, in lack of other terms, a mean bitch.
Author's Response:
What she excells at
Date: October 30 2019 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 10: Dinner Date
I can't wait to the humiliation she is about to subject him too. I'm aroused at the prospect of what she is going to do to him with that large beautiful frame of hers.
Author's Response:
You'll see
Date: October 30 2019 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 10: Dinner Date
me ha encantado el capitulo, la historia en general es fantastica, ojala llegue pronto proximos capitulos, y el grado de dominación y humillacion vaya subiendo.Gracias por hacer feliz a tus lectores
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading it and supporting me!