Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2019 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 4: Unknown Power

Actual real world size differences are almost never written about.  I commend you on doing so.

First, my critisisms.  They all deal with grammatical mistakes such as misspellings and incorrect word usage.  Although they are numerous, they are easily passed over by the reader as your writting style is quite clear and fluid.

Now as to your story plot, FANTASTIC!  Please, continue this story, it's great.

I have a similar story about a female body builder who hates and abuses midget men; but have yet to either finish or publish it.

On a side note, have you ever seen this? 

https://www.google.com/search?q=guinness+world%27s+longest+legs+and+shortest+man&tbm=isch&source=univ&client=firefox-b-1-d&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwiig77T5ZThAhVIGt8KHdSHDVcQsAR6BAgIEAE&biw=1536&bih=767 

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Author's Response:

Hey thanks for your review, even if my reply is very tardy to say the least. Yeah me and grammer don't always get along, i probably really need to read over my work to be safe, but i'm generally to impatient and want to get stuff out as quick as possible. Your story sounds very interesting, maybe one day some of us will get to read it. but again thanks for your review, i appreciate the support