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Reviewer: memesRlife Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2022 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 1: Presence on the Platform

HOLY SHIT YOU'RE ALIVE! It actually took me a couple of second to recognise the story from the chapter blurb. Can't wait to read this new chapter.

Author's Response:

Yep it's been a while, i hope you enjoy

Reviewer: scow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2022 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Presence on the Platform

Wow! I apparently missed this story when you were first writing it! I absolutely love it! I love how bold she is and I love the size difference between them! Even the mere act of rolling over in bed is too much for him to handle! I like that you are teasing the more dominant side of her in the these chapters. I loved how she straddled him and tried to ride him and I loved your description of her foot going up his back and her toes on the back of his head before she shoved his face down. This is one of my favorite stories I’ve read! I hope you continue with it! I would love to see more action and raunchiness that she is clearly very capable of. Great story so far!



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you're able to enjoy my story, i always love to hear that people are enjoying it

Reviewer: JBK91 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14 2019 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: Presence on the Platform

Would love to see more of this soon!

Author's Response:

Just going over some stuff, but new chapters will drop soon

Reviewer: Hugetallgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2019 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: Presence on the Platform

I love this story. It's simply amazing! Your writing skills are excellent. I have two questions though: 1) Will you reveal the exact height of the tall girl? 2) Is she younger or older than him or are they around the same age? Or will you reveal that later as well? 



Author's Response:

Sorry on the late reply, first off She is around 6'8 or 6'7, i thought i explained her height in the prologue. As for their ages, they're both around their mid twenties 

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2019 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 1: Presence on the Platform

Okay, I have sent you a message on Discord. When are you likely to want to meet for a text or voice chat? The more details you can include the better. I don't mind if it takes a few sessions to her exactly how you'd want her.

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