[Report This]Date: October 04 2020 2:59 AM Title: Act 3 (Final): Bursting Emotions!
I have my rating as a 10 so I can balance out the overall rating better, because my real rating for this is probably around 8 or 9 and I don't think it deserves the low rating it has right now. Pretty good stuff, just definitely needs some proofreading to fix grammatical mistakes and a little bit more backstory to flesh out the characters.
[Report This]Date: February 26 2019 9:18 AM Title: Act 1: A Chance Encounter?
Sorry didnt mean to rate it that low
Author's Response:
That's fine. If you can't change it then that's okay. But also next time please be more careful. Also I would like to hear your thoughts on this rather than just saying the stars are an accident....
[Report This]Date: February 26 2019 9:05 AM Title: Act 2: Quality Time...?
Its ok so far, i would definitely be careful with how the dialogue is set up, because i have seen people do this before and their story reads like a bad middle school play, but it seems to be ok so far.
Author's Response:
Hmm....I'll be sure to keep that in mind with my stories in the future. Also it's kinda strange that you rated this Act even lower than the first one....