[Report This]Date: January 12 2021 6:06 AM Title: A New Beginning
Had wanted to leave feedback on some of the earlier chapters. But I got so engrossed in reading the story that I could not stop! ^.^ To be shrunken down and used as a toy like this would have been too much for most people to bare in itself. But to then learn that you've been being filmed for the pleasure of others. Is simply unreal! Definitely one of the more unique twists that I've seen in sizeplay fiction. And a very powerful element to the story. I love it! I also love that the two women are able to control his size. And have no qualms with making him extremely small. Can't wait to see more of the story.
Am curious if this fellow will wind up being hooked into some kind of body piercing or some such thing. And paraded around for the viewers to see. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! And I'm glad you liked it. But, to be honest, I am torn on how public the streamers want to make their activities. I think, in this world, size stuff is either taboo or illegal, but I haven't established that yet.
Date: March 27 2020 6:44 PM Title: A New Beginning
u may add more on ass
Date: July 06 2019 1:53 AM Title: A New Beginning
I hope this resumes soon!
Author's Response:
Oh, it will. Anything that I have written will eventually finish, but I am an unreliable writer.
Date: February 05 2019 4:21 PM Title: A New Beginning
I'm wondering if Renee should be spelled "Renée" (French spelling because it's a French name) or Rennæ. "æ" for such words with an "a" before the "e", like encyclopedia and archaeology. I guess it's fine as you spelled it. No other comments about spelling or grammar as far as I'm concerned.
This is a curious story. I hope Renee's character will be explored more. What are her motivs? I love the mystery surrounding Renee. I think I'll grow to love this story, assuming you nuture it.
Author's Response:
It should absolutely be spelled with the accent, should the character be authentic. However, it is set in the US, and few Americans care to preserve the ethnic authenticiy of their names in the face of the unyielding demands of demographic paperwork. Renee is pronounced 'Renée,' but the weight of American administration has reduced it to 'Renee.'