Date: September 19 2019 5:06 AM Title: Redux Chapter 15 - Will
Fantastic chapter! Love to see AJ being all big and mighty.
I feared for a moment that you went with an open end, but thankfully you already said that more chapters will follow. <3
Keep up the good work! And thanks again!
Author's Response:
I'll be sure to put a big "THE END" at the end. That way you'll know for sure!
Date: September 18 2019 6:10 AM Title: Redux Chapter 15 - Will
you have got to be kidding me
terrible story 2/10
But in all seriousness, it was very nice finally see Heather and A.J. fully indulging themselves. I suppose jason coming back was inevitable, got to get his own ending in there somehow, but what bothers me is how easy that was. Heather seriously left NO ONE to watch him? If so, I guess those that can grow no longer need to eat since it's implied he's been there for months and hasn't starved. You'd think she'd have some kind of alarm system, considering she can teleport now those renegades should have never even made it to the containment pod. But I suppose that goes in the same bin as the surveilence equipment, "If logic was used there would be no story." :P
Though now I question the future length of this story considering your "deadline". But I suppose we'll just wait and see. Looking forward to more~
P.S. GOD I wish I was Greg Dawes...
Author's Response:
Have faith ;)
Hopefully the next chapter will be up today. It won't be the last, but yeah we're nearing it.
[Report This]Date: September 17 2019 7:53 PM Title: Redux Chapter 15 - Will
Love the new development of this story! I feel as though it has ended though? Say it ain't so!