Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2019 6:37 PM Title: Redux Chapter 8 - Submission

That was your best chapter so far. I think this version of the story is a massive improvement over the first one. Only issue is, I'm still looking forward to Heather taking the focus from Jason. And I'm looking forward to Heather unchained. I take it that eating people is how they increase their growth potential? Hopefully you'll have a chapter of Heather hunting and eating people now that she's got a taste of human.

Goddess Heather ftw.

Author's Response:

Literally just posted a chapter that you might like. Enjoy