[Report This]Date: February 08 2019 6:29 PM Title: Fiona’s Homecoming | Fiona / Alyssa
I've sent you a direct message with some other points as well, but just in case that didn't come through, here's at least the review bit again:
The new chapter in the Handmaids Tales had great descriptions of destruction that absolutely tickled my fancy. Those little notes on how a room just buckles, cracks, and rips were great. The only thing missing would be the croaking sounds of crumbling concrete and bending metal. But still, absolutely divine, and a great scenario altogether! I loved it.
(Also, if you did get the message; ignore the bit about Clouded Perspective. I somehow confused all the chapter names, and as a result, I'm convinced I must be some sort of idiot.)
Author's Response:
Hi TitanTheia,
I got your email and have replied.
Many thanks for your kind feedback! I will see what I can do in future to make them more realised!
Currently have a couple of ideas bouncing around just looking for an inspiration moment to put the words to page.
Your support keeps me writing!
JFT