Date: November 06 2018 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 3- Talitha the Terrible attacks the royal palace
Interesting scenario, a feral, uncivilized wild woman giantess causing trouble for a small kingdom.
Just a bit of a inconsistency about Talitha's size. It's said she's 100 feet but in the first chapter she swallows 30 people whole, to do this she would have to be a lot bigger, at about 100 feet a giantess would only be able to swallow one person at a time, it would be like swallowing a skinny pickle. Maybe Talitha is bigger?
Jack causing Talitha to panic when he goes into her anus is funny, but I don't know why Talitha didn't just use her anal muscles to fart him out or squeeze him out like a turd instead of panicking.
I can pretty much guess that the poison isn't going to kill her just badly irritate her digestive system, adding to Talitha's misery.
It seems that her skin is too thick for sword or arrows to have much effect, so that leaves her insides as her vulnerability. Maybe Charon can cast an invulnerability spell on Jack, and trick Talitha into swallowing him. With her soft insides under the threat of Jack and his dagger as he stays and passes through her digestive tract, Talitha can be forced to submit under the pain and threat of having her insides cut as long as Jack stays inside her going through her.
Author's Response:
Ah, yes. Now that you mentioned it, 30people in her mouth didn't make sense... I will edit and change that part of the story. ( Do excuse my inexperience as this is my first time writing a giantess story )... but thank you for putting this to my attention kind sir :)
Also it wasn't Jack that entered her anus but in fact an actual rat that got caught up in the debris of the crushed house. Which is why she shrieked at the sight of it and panicked to get it off her body.
And let's not forget about the other magical weapons Smith is currently crafting, perphaps something more powerful than the glowing dagger?
And as for the poison... a very good guess sir :)