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Date: November 02 2018 8:17 AM Title: Ch 4: Alena's Turn...

This was a great chapter! I REALLY enjoy the concept of them being able to text each other while he’s in her shoe! That has real possibilities for playfulness and teasing, but also encouragement for what he’s doing. Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Since this is a story, rather than an interactive text adventure where a major objective is getting the attention of whichever girl you're currently around, I can do things like having characters casually text back and forth. Glad you liked it!

For Alena, it would definitely be used for simple communicatation and encouragement, but other characters would surely use it for some playful teasing.

Take care!

 

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