Date: November 04 2018 4:04 PM Title: The First Test
Again, nice descriptive writing.
At least as far as I'm concerned, you've nailed the high points of this fantasy.
You might find this interesting; a while ago I did some research and discovered a study was done back in the sixties where they took a large number of 'normal' male/female couples and had them role-play the vore concept. One for one. it nearly blew their heads off and it was decided it was a universal phenomena but not awakened in most people.
So don't go thinking you're perculiar, you're just more aware than just about everyone.
By the way, thank you for your belated review of The Clone.
Date: September 30 2018 6:48 PM Title: Two Become One
Good job. Nice discriptive writing and nice to see someome explore different senarios.
Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: September 30 2018 6:31 AM Title: Two Become One
..forgot the stars
Date: September 30 2018 6:19 AM Title: Two Become One
Good switch between willing and unwilling without getting hung up. I like how there’s a district difference between the two types.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, I appreciate it! I'm hoping to develope the two types more as the story unfolds. Let me know if you have any advice/tips to improve, I'm always looking to get better.