You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: The Mant Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2018 2:55 AM Title: Out of the Heat

Awesome story so far. I was heart broken though with the wasted opprotunity of a possible sandal crush on the floor. Can't wait for the next installment though!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2018 7:41 PM Title: Out of the Heat

In case I was being too subtle? I think that opening sentence in the ninth paragraph was meant to read "...massive fingers."

Author's Response:

Oops.  Looks like I should fix that huh amusing as it is.  Thanks for pointing it out!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2018 4:27 PM Title: Out of the Heat

Oh, dea! It looks like Fate has once more flicked her fickle "finer" at our hero.

;-)

You must login (register) to review.