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Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2018 6:29 PM Title: Bad Dreams

Glad to see him wake up so small. It's time to get to some real fun. I do knida wonder if fear from his nightmares will ever play in, like if he gets more worried about getting lost and starts to cling even closer to Sarah.



Author's Response:

The rest of the chapters are going to be a great time, I just hope they don't get too repetitive when he reaches maximum smallness.  The dreams are really just fun scenarios I come up with where the various giantesses get to smash or eat him, they're more of a release valve so that I don't do it in the actual story.  I might start a companion piece that's just dreams once he gets really small so I don't end this one prematurely out of frustration of not having Sarah eat him if that's something people would be interested in.

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